Feedback - Miss Spencer

There is some excellent work here Mitchell, especially in the analysis of the two horror films. You have pointed out the conventions that are present, as well as discussing the meanings behind them, and the way the audience is likely to read the opening.

However I think you need to do a little more work on the Rom-Com analysis. You barely mention conventions, I suspect that is because you are not sure what they are? Can you do some more research into the conventions of Rom-Com and use this to add to your discussion please. For example you could talk about conventions more - e.g the cross cutting of the two main protagonists to imply that they are going to meet - and then not meeting (yet) is a typical convention of Rom-Com. It will improve your work, and your knowledge.

At the moment your work is on a level 2/3 border so does need some more detail adding.

Can you also:

Embed the film clip into the blog post.
Import stills from the film to illustrate your points.
Add a title to the post (otherwise it takes the first line of your work as the title)

Well done and keep up the hard work.